Wednesday, December 16, 2009
The Picture of Dorain Gray Book Review
Only when Dorian views the sin his portrait illustrates, does he feel remorse. The mutilation of the portrait is the mirror into Dorian's soul. Disgusted by his souls appearance, Dorian becomes concerned and thinks to repent. Dorian's whole life revolves around his selfish motive to have a "beautiful appearance" which leads to his tragic end. If you like this read, then check out the newly released movie Dorian Gray. This classic is definitely worth the read.
Wordsworth's Spots of Time: Due by Tuesday, December 22nd
From Wordsworth's The Prelude 12.208-218 (1805 Edition)
"There are in existence spots of time,
That with distinct pre-eminence retain,
A renovating virtue, whence-depressed
By false opinion and contentious thought,
Or aught of heavier or more deadly weight,
In trivial occupations, and the round
Of ordinary intercourse - our minds
Are nourished and invisibly repaired;
A virtue by which pleasure is enhanced
That penetrates, enables us to mount,
When high, more high, and lifts us up when fallen."
One of the essential elements of Wordsworth's poetics surrounds the notion of "spots of time," or those experiences (usually in nature) that return to us again and again in our memory through vivid images to invigorate, reawaken, and refresh our tired minds. For Wordsworth, these moments might seem small and inconsequential during the experience; however, when they return again in the mind's eye, they become a powerful force of mental pleasure and nourishment.
Is there a "spot of time" within your memory that you often recall when you are in need of a spiritual and mental lift?
Thursday, December 10, 2009
Paradise Lost Review (first five books)
A Lesson Before Dying: A Review
By: Dora, Maddy, Kesiah, Varun, Mitchell, Sheena
Thursday, December 3, 2009
Book Review Posts
Wednesday, December 2, 2009
Week of November 30th - December 4th
Wednesday 12/2: John Donne response answers
(Aaaagh) Intro to Romanticism: Using the wiki to investigate and
build knowledge
Thursday 12/3: Poetry Out Loud Contest
Friday 12/4: POL continued, Romanticism work in class (A Day – Rios Class)
Week of December 7th - 11th
Monday 12/7: Outside reading essays/notes due
Work on Romanticism definitions (B Day)
Tuesday 12/8: Work on Romanticism definitions (A Day – Rios class)
Wednesday 12/9: Sharing Romanticism definitions
(Aaaagh) Continue with sharing definitions
Thursday 12/10: Outside reading presentations (Seth’s group will go first)
Friday 12/11: No class ½ day
Week of December 14th – 18th
Monday 12/14: Romanticism poetry projects assigned
Tuesday 12/15: Project work
Wednesday 12/16: Project work
(Aaaagh) Continue with project work
Thursday 12/17: Project presentations
Friday 12/18: Project presentations
Week of December 21st – 23rd
Monday 12/21: Frankenstein intro
Tuesday 12/22: Frankenstein intro
Wednesday 12/23: Frankenstein intro
http://apenglishwiki.wikispaces.com/ REMEMBER TO SAVE
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Visiting Author/Illustrator: Brian Pinkney

Acclaimed artist Brian Pinkney is the illustrator of several highly-praised picture books including The Faithful Friend, In the Time of the Drums, and Duke Ellington . He is a graduate of the University of the Arts in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, and holds a master's degree in illustration from the School of Visual Arts in New York City. He lives in Brooklyn, New York with his wife Andrea, with whom he often collaborates, and his two children.
Our visiting author/illustrator will join us during period 3 (9:20-10:00) on Monday, November 23rd. Please read the biography below and check out the attached websites for more information. Many thanks to the Elmsford Author's Fund for their work in bringing us these wonderful experiences with writers and artists!
Brian has won numerous awards including two Caldecott Honors, four Coretta Scott King Honors and a Coretta Scott King Award, and the Boston Globe/Horn Book Award. He has been exhibited at The Art Institute of Chicago, Cedar Rapids Museum of Art, The Detroit Institute of Art, The Cleveland Museum of Art, The School of Visual Arts, and The Society of Illustrators.
He has been published by Greenwillow Books, Hyperion Books for Young Readers, Harcourt Children's Books, Simon & Schuster, and Random House. His work has also appeared in New York Times Magazine, Women's Day, Business Tokyo, Ebony Man, and Instructor.
Websites to See:
http://www.brianpinkney.net
http://www.childrenslit.com/childrenslit/mai_pinkney_brian.html
Friday, November 13, 2009
John Donne Assignment for Wednesday, 11/18/09
How does Donne express his concept of love? Consider what major metaphysical conceit and supporting imagery are used to create a specific tone and message about love in this poem. Post your response in comment form. Be sure to incorporate essential examples from the poem.
"Love's Diet"
TO what a cumbersome unwieldiness
And burdenous corpulence my love had grown,
But that I did, to make it less,
And keep it in proportion,
Give it a diet, made it feed upon
That which love worst endures, discretion
Above one sigh a day I allow'd him not,
Of which my fortune, and my faults had part ;
And if sometimes by stealth he got
A she sigh from my mistress' heart,
And thought to feast upon that, I let him see
'Twas neither very sound, nor meant to me.
If he wrung from me a tear, I brined it so
With scorn and shame, that him it nourish'd not ;
If he suck'd hers, I let him know
'Twas not a tear which he had got ;
His drink was counterfeit, as was his meat ;
For eyes, which roll towards all, weep not, but sweat.
Whatever he would dictate I writ that,
But burnt her letters when she writ to me ;
And if that favour made him fat,
I said, "If any title be
Convey'd by this, ah ! what doth it avail,
To be the fortieth name in an entail?"
Thus I reclaim'd my buzzard love, to fly
At what, and when, and how, and where I choose.
Now negligent of sports I lie,
And now, as other falconers use,
I spring a mistress, swear, write, sigh, and weep ;
And the game kill'd, or lost, go talk or sleep.
Monday, November 2, 2009
Class Schedule: Week of 11/2/09

Since I will be attending a conference on Tuesday and Wednesday, I thought it would be benefical to post our weekly schedule on the blog. If you need to get in touch with me for any reason, please email me at csilva@elmsd.org. Enjoy!
Tuesday 11/3: Timed in-class essay on the sonnet
Wednesday 11/4: Work in class on your outside reading selection
No "aaagh" class today during period 9 - Please work on your books
If your group has not given me a title yet, you need to post it asap.
Thursday 11/5: Faustus rewrites due
Sonnet Presentations
Friday 11/6: Sonnet Presentations
Choosing your poems for Poetry Out Loud
Monday, October 26, 2009
Eugene's Comment on other blogs
I fervently agree with Livia's observation that Faustus is unsure of himself. There are many quotes that reflect this, but my favorite is in the first scene of act II: "What might the staying of my blood portend? Is it unwilling that I might write this bill?" (II.i.65-66) This reflects an extreme uncertainty in Faustus' decision to sign away his soul, to the point that his life's essence, his blood, hesitates and congeals.
I found Derrick's post to be quite edifying, and his argument to be very poignant in relation to the play. I have often wondered when reading works that question the validity of religion, why God didn't choose to make everyone perfect, or the world perfect? This question always brings to mind an excellent quote by the ancient greek philosopher Epicurus: "Is God willing to prevent evil, but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able, but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing? Then why call him God?" In some ways, I find this question to be Faustus' question and moral struggle that compromises him so. He is unsure as to how and why God created man without a complete understanding of the world, so he turns to the only other omniscient character known to man for help: the Devil.
Faustus Comment (post)/ Eugene's Computer Needs a Hug
I particularly enjoyed some of the quotes Barnet applied to the text. One quote, from R. M. Dawkins, was perhaps the best applied of all: Dr. Faustus is "the story of a Renaissance man who had to pay the medieval price for being one." I agree wholeheartedly with this remark. As I said in the first Socratic circle, Faustus' quest was for power, but through the vehicle of knowledge and independent study. The pursuit of knowledge was a common practice for any Renaissance man, and often resulted in the questioning of religion. Such questioning in medieval times would result in a fate very similar to the one suffered by Faustus.
I also enjoyed where Sylvan says "One can find innumerable statements, in the best and worst Renaissance writers, that support authority (Marlowe's chorus is a case in point)..." I, once again, agree with this idea. I felt, almost immediately, that the chorus' summations not made their role in the play an informational character, but as an omniscient presence as well. Their presentation of a moral at the end of the play is a perfect example of this: "Only to wonder at unlawful things, whose deepness doth entice such forward wits to practice more than heavenly power permits." (V.iii.6-8) This establishes the chorus as not only an authority, but one that reflects the values of medieval society. I found this to be interesting because nearly all of the values held by medieval society clash with the ones held by Marlowe. Perhaps the chorus was used also used as something to compare the new society that was emerging in the renaissance to the old society that was fading away in the dark ages.
Saturday, October 24, 2009
Monday, October 19, 2009
Faustus Test Point Blog Response: 10 Points

Tuesday, October 13, 2009
President Faustus
Mephestophilis would appear as the president’s life coach, helping Faustus make all of hjis decision, and teaching him how to get through the rough times of his presidency. The life coach will be invisible to others, and will be by Faustus’ side all the time telling him what to say during speeches and what plans to make for the country.
Monday, October 12, 2009
Modern Faustus: Mephistopheles will be Madoff!!
It has been almost 4 centuries and a decade since Christopher Marlowe wrote Dr. Faustus. Therefore, if there was to be a modern day Faustus, a lot would be different from the original version. In my modern version of Faustus, he can be anybody, really. More particularly, he should be a person with a dream chasing for success, like a college student. Because Dr. Faustus is a true renaissance man, he pursues knowledge and more knowledge. As essential as knowledge is still nowadays, there are modern day people who have mininal knowledge but are still successful just because some things go their way. Therefore, a modern day Faustus would wish for unlimited access of good luck- there isn't a time when good luck harms a person. As mentioned in Eugene's blog title, Roark mentioned that selling the soul is the easiest thing to do. That shows how far, possibly negatively, we have come from the renaissance period. So instead of selling his soul, the modern day faustus would probably make a trade for luck by giving up all his possessions and belonglings such as money, house, etc.
Instead of as a monk, modern day Mephistopheles could appear as someone who has gained success but in a corrupt and immoral way. It could be a rich, corrupt businessman- like Bernard Madoff. He would appear that way to symbolize moral corruption and dark magic because chasing for success by wishing for luck is exactly those. After Faustus gave all his money and possessions to Madoff/Mephistopheles, Mephi would simply just break the deal just as the real Madoff did in the real world and leave Faustus empty handed without either good luck or returning what he gave up.
The modern-day Faustus
No Doctor in Faustus
For this reason I think Mephy would appear as a sports agent. I sports agent is a tough negotiator who can promise the world (much like Mephy) when in reality he knows he can't. Just like when Faustus is awed when he gets the book, the athlete might be awed when his agent gets him a big time contract. Although the athlete might think that he is getting paid, so is the agent. Faustus is the same thinking he is getting the most out of the situation, but he is losing his soul. Another similarity is that Faustus' deal lasts only 24 years while an athletes career will probably last a lot shorter.
Don't ask a woman her age! You'll die! -Beauty and Youth: The Modern Day Faustussa
The modern-day Faustus would be a young a women in this case. I am not saying that men are not interested in staying fit and “beautiful” ,but it is more likely for a woman to sell her soul for eternal beauty and youth. She would be a true Renaissance woman succeeding in art, music, medicine, and intelligence. Because beauty is worshipped today, the modern-day Faustus would be part of that mass culture. Like Faustus, she would be unsatisfied with her capabilities, knowledge and talents. She would want more than what she already has and would try to move up the "social ladder" with her looks .The modern day Faustus would trade her soul to become the most beautiful girl in the world falling victim to envy and having the attention of all modeling agencies. She would also, of course, have the attention of all the men. Obviously with this much beauty, she would commit some, if not all, of the seven deadly sins like Envy, Sloth, Greed and Wrath. Commiting the sins and increasing her pride will ultimately lead to her downfall.
In Marlowe’s Dr. Faustus, Mephistopheles appears as a monk. However, in today’s society Mephistopheles would probably appear as an "over processed", rich woman that has had every single plastic surgery known in the book. This “Mephistopheles” would represent the preoccupation of beauty in today’s society. People go to great lengths in order to obtain beauty and are obsessed with looking younger than they are. Our society is preoccupied with buying into the hype of beauty and youth and I think the modern day Faustus and Mephistopheles would be no different than the rest of society. There are commercials, ad-campaigns, and magazines that target women of all ages to look a certain way. Examples of products that target this are Proactiv for acne, OLAY, Neutrogena, and Cover girl for youth and beauty and Bally Total Fitness, and Nutrisystem for weight loss.
I would not trade my soul in for beauty unlike the modern day Faustus. However, I would love to know how the universe formed. Is the Big Bang Theory correct? Or is it something else? I love learning about space and the universe. It’s something I have always questioned and was interested in since I was seven years old. There is so much we do not know about the world around us and I think that knowing what happened in the beginning will help us discover mysteries like how life began on Earth. I've even considered being an astrophysicist like Michiro Kaku or Carl Sagan because I love learning about space. Money and wealth would be nice, but I would love to gain the knowledge of the universe. I would also love to know if there are other “humans” or any other type of life out there. I would love to know if we really are alone.
Modern-Day Faustus = Us
As we grow, we often dream for more. Yes, we may appreciate the things we already have but I feel that everyone at some point in their life, wanted more than what they had. Speaking on my behalf, I know that I dream about being wealthy and obtaining knowledge, I mean who doesn’t? We go to school for this reason: so we can learn as we go to school and then use that knowledge to later find a job that we not only love but that can also help bring home the bread. As for the fun part, we have fun a day-to-day basis; hanging out with our friends, family, loved ones, laughing, and enjoying life as we move forward.
Something that I thought I would bring up is how Faustus sells his soul to achieve his goal. I think we can all relate in some way where we would do the same to achieve something we thought was worth our life. Whether this means selling your soul to have the college you want to go to accept you or to save someone close to you. I can say from one of my personal experiences, I would’ve sold my soul in a heartbeat to save one of my best friends from the claws of death. As we talked in class, this notion was also shown in the movie Ghostrider where the protagonist sells his soul to the devil in order to save his father from drying.
Now as for Mephostophilis, I feel that in today’s world money would represent him. Not only does money cause greed in the world, it also blinds people of reality. Yes we need money to survive in this world but it’s not the only necessity we require. Money can also lure people to do things they usually wouldn’t. Just as Faustus uses Mephostophilis to help him with these greedy and evil biddings, we use money to buy what we desire and what we want, both good and bad.
"To sell your soul is the easiest thing in the world."
To me, the soul is the metaphysical embodiment of one's values, ego, and capacity of judgment. To sell this is quite an act and voids oneself of nearly all that makes a human a human!
Yet, as Faustus proves and Roark goes on to say, people do it nearly every day.
Today's world is no exception. Yet today, one who would sell their soul would probably not take the form of a man of knowledge like Faustus, nor would the one who bought the soul take the form of a devil. Instead, they both might the form of a door to door salesman.
Every day, the salesman goes out and travels from door to door to peoples' houses that he doesn't know and tries to sell things that will somehow make their lives better or easier. In this action, he not only attempts sell useless items to unsuspecting suburban dwellers, he offers up his soul. Like I said before, I believe the soul to be an amalgam of a number of essential human characteristics. In the case of the salesman, the one that might be forfeited first is one's values. The primary goal of a salesman is to get the potential customer to buy the product. Sometimes, by any means necessary. These practices may include exaggerating the effectiveness or abilities of a product, in which the salesman lies to the customer. Not only does the salesman lie to the customer in this act, he lies to himself. This is a destruction of any honest man's values. He is selling a product on false pretenses and destroying the honesty of the company that allowed him to sell it. Another salesman practice is to "sell" the product. This practice includes entertaining the buyer or charming them while telling them how wonderful the product is. A prime example of this is in the "Shamwow" commercials seen on TV and nearly all of Billy Mays' commercials. In such commercials the salesperson is seen jumping from place to place showing how effective the product is, or simply screaming about how wonderful it is. Though these commercials are entertaining, it is important to realize how much work these people are putting into selling towels or cleaning products. It is almost like these people are placing the products in front of themselves, desperately trying to sell them while silently losing parts of their souls as they pour bits of them into selling these products with such fervor.
At the same time, a salesman could be the Mephistopheles of this world. When the salesman sells his product, he must first convince the potential customer to purchase it. As said before, a salesman will do nearly anything to sell his product. Even an uninterested customer might eventually be charmed into buying a product. Yet, there is something more in this than simply being "charmed" into buying something. By buying a product they were originally uninterested in, they have forfeited their chief interest: remaining true to what they want. This is something incredibly important in keeping one's soul. By submitting to the words and charms of another, they have sold their soul by submitting to the will of another (the will of the salesman to buy the product)
As others have stated, a modern Faustus would be different, but definitely not improved.
